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Some people think that young children benefit from going to nursery school before starting primary school.other think it is better to young children to stay all day with their families.discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is very good for growing kids
to go
Suggestion
go
 to
pre school
an educational institution for children too young for elementary school
preschool
 for learning before starting the actual schooling.Staying at home all the time makes them inactive and lame.Nobody wants their children to be so
.
Accept space
.
Down below there are some statements which helps to elaborate
this
 situation by going in favour and against it. Nursery schools
plays
Suggestion
play
are playing
 a vital role in the kids upbringing nowadays. There are many activities done for children which helps them to be more responsible
,
Accept space
,
 active
,
Accept space
,
 and innovative.
Such
 examples are painting
,
Accept space
,
 drawings
,
Accept space
,
 outings and much more.These
sort
Suggestion
sorts
 of social activities helps to improve their brain and physical health.Playing around with other kids makes them more interactive and initiative towards
outer world
Suggestion
the outer world
 which is very significant.
On the other hand
, some of parents
Suggestion
, some parents
 think that children should stay home rather than going out are over
protactive
intended or adapted to afford protection of some kind
protective
 and lesser innovative by nature.These types of
kids which
Accept comma addition
kids, which
 stays at home and not taking part in extra
circullar
of or relating to an academic course of study
curricular
 activities are mostly very
aggresive
having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
 and introvert.
their
Suggestion
There
Their
 is
huge difference
Suggestion
a huge difference
 in them in terms of
habbits
an established custom
habits
,
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,
thinking process and self awareness.
sticking
Suggestion
Sticking
 to homes make them shy and less participative by nature. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
 I
prefferable
more readily or willingly
preferably
preferable
 suggest that we should have to consider these types of schools as a most prior activity in their growing age.
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