The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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traditional communicate is being replaced with social
converstation
the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.
conversation
using
social media app
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the social media app
a social media app
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such
as
facebook
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Facebook
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any activity that is performed alone without assistance
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or
instagram
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trend would
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introduce
both side
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but
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
benifits
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the benefits
benefits
of using social media have brought to our lives are overweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand
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it is clear that social media bring about
serveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
drawbacks
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People who using online media are dependent on the stability of the Internet
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For instance
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when the internet connection
have
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has
a problem is it
extremly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
hard to
countinue
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continue
a
converstation
the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.
conversation
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there are some people use social networking by many wrong way or overuse it too much. Young people
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are being
the model of people who do
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many
conflits
an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)
conflicts
happen just because they are dissented and
strate
successive (without a break)
straight
street
state
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on
their phone when they have dinner with family without paying attention to people around them. On the
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
outer
others
hand
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there are many
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
of online
converstation
the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.
conversation
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Firstly
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people using it can easier keep in touch with our loved ones who are different for them to interact face - to - face
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For example
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students studying aboard can keep in contact with their family
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friends on
daily baisis
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a daily basis
daily basis
using video call of
social media app
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a social media app
social media apps
such
as sky
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facebook
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Facebook
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Secondly
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social media is
also
a powerful tool in education
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Students who do not conditions or can not
antend
be present at (meetings, church services, university), etc.
attend
an tend
face-to-face classes will be easily replaced with distance learning where they are carried out over the internet or by post. For
practicial
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
example is in
this
year 2020
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virus Covid -19 is compel almost schools in the world suspend operation in a long
time so
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time, so
that distance learning always the best way for everyone who are studying to ensure safety and still have basic knowledges
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Finally
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the
informations
a message received and understood
information
that social media brought to people should mention
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For
exemple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
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It will be easier and faster to get daily news about
covid
overlaid or spread or topped with or enclosed within something; sometimes used as a combining form
covered
curved
- 19 via social networking In conclusion
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there are many minus points of social media
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However
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its
the thing named or in question
it
seem
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seems
to me that drawbacks are outweighed by
benifits
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the benefits
benefits
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