The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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traditional communicate is being replaced with social

converstation

the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.

conversation

using

social media app

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the social media app

a social media app

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such

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facebook

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zalo

any activity that is performed alone without assistance

solo

sale

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think

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the benefits

benefits

of using social media have brought to our lives are overweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand

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it is clear that social media bring about

serveral

(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many

several

drawbacks

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People who using online media are dependent on the stability of the Internet

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when the internet connection

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a problem is it

extremly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

hard to

countinue

continue a certain state, condition, or activity

continue

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converstation

the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.

conversation

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there are some people use social networking by many wrong way or overuse it too much. Young people

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are being

the model of people who do

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many

conflits

an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)

conflicts

happen just because they are dissented and

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successive (without a break)

straight

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state

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their phone when they have dinner with family without paying attention to people around them. On the

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

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hand

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there are many

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

of online

converstation

the use of speech for informal exchange of views or ideas or information etc.

conversation

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people using it can easier keep in touch with our loved ones who are different for them to interact face - to - face

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students studying aboard can keep in contact with their family

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friends on

daily baisis

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a daily basis

daily basis

using video call of

social media app

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a social media app

social media apps

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as sky

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facebook

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Facebook

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social media is

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a powerful tool in education

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Students who do not conditions or can not

antend

be present at (meetings, church services, university), etc.

attend

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face-to-face classes will be easily replaced with distance learning where they are carried out over the internet or by post. For

practicial

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

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virus Covid -19 is compel almost schools in the world suspend operation in a long

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that distance learning always the best way for everyone who are studying to ensure safety and still have basic knowledges

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the

informations

a message received and understood

information

that social media brought to people should mention

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exemple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

examples

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It will be easier and faster to get daily news about

covid

overlaid or spread or topped with or enclosed within something; sometimes used as a combining form

covered

curved

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there are many minus points of social media

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the thing named or in question

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seems

to me that drawbacks are outweighed by

benifits

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the benefits

benefits

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