1. Tourism is an ever-growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
Modern world
is on the verge of globalisation and Suggestion
The modern world
therefore
it brings about some vital issues which are going to be discussed below.
Initially
there are myriad of merits that tourism
gives to the up to date world. Nowadays tourists
tend to visit Accept comma addition
Nowadays, tourists
variety
of countries for different purposes Suggestion
a variety
such
as vacations, business or even maybe for migration. Irrespective of the tourists
purposes Suggestion
tourist
tourism
stimulates the improvement in touristic
domain with its
a lot of felicities. the thing named or in question
it
First
and one of the crucial Suggestion
The first
benefit
of Suggestion
benefits
tourism
for dwellers is that tourism
simultaneously boost the rate of employed locals. Hence
the local people are able to earn bread and butter for their family. Moreover it
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Moreover, it
foster
to decrease the segment of unemployed Suggestion
fosters
people
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people, thus
thus
the prosperity of people increases.It can be benefited from individual by gaining more and more earnings. There are some jobs that face rapid increase such
as local vendors, hotel butlers, the promotion of various restaurants and hotels, shopping malls, parks, sightseeingplaces
and Suggestion
sightseeing places
etcetera
.The indigenous people thrive to allure tourists with some recreational activities, local domestic products or souvieners
. The more tourists visit the something of sentimental value
souvenirs
country
the more country
becomes wealthier. As I mentioned the benefit
of tourism
for an individual is indisputable fact. Another benefit
of tourism
for an individual is that people tend to communicate with foreign visitors so they exchange their culture mutually by feeling smyphaty
towards one another and learning how to respect to other people from different culture and background.Furthermore
the locals learn more information about different nation
and their historical backgrounds by sharing stories with one another. By exchanging different ideas, people tend to become more Suggestion
different nations
symphatic
and amiable towards foreigners. used of organisms (especially of different species) living together but not necessarily in a relation beneficial to each
symbiotic
In addition
to benefit
of tourism
for society
is that the high touristic
countries’ people tend to be multilingual and are able to speak more than two language
because of Suggestion
languages
high demand
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the high demand
by
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of
society
.Therefore
the literacy rate among people enhance and its immense lucrative impact on education is noticiably
undeniable. One of the crucial point is that it should be mentioned in a noticeable manner
noticeably
tourism
gives the rise to the Gross Domestic Product which
is directly Accept comma addition
Product, which
releated
to general revenue of the state. Due to the myriad visits to the being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
country
the government tends to facilitate by means of communication and transportation in favour of locals and visitors. Hence
the prosperity of society
and individuals boost by opening new hotels, restaurants, groceries and creating various recreational activities. Simply to say the more earnings the society
to get the
more amenities are going to be created for both dwellers and foreign visitors.It can easily be seen in the examples of developed countries Accept comma addition
get, the
such
France, USA, Arabic Emirates, England and etcetera
. The more tourists visits
the more Suggestion
visit
country
is going to be developed by improving throughly
. Improvement of in an exhaustive manner
thoroughly
tourism
is simultaneously equal the advancement of local business, prosperity of individual
and Suggestion
individuals
the individual
society
.
Finally
, to recapitulate, I do cogitate that tourism
bring
about Suggestion
brings
plethora
of benefits with it. It is Suggestion
the plethora
a plethora
indusputable
that there are myriad of amenities for both dwellers and not open to question; obviously true
indisputable
society
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion