1. Tourism is an ever-growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

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The modern world

is on the verge of globalisation and

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it brings about some vital issues which are going to be discussed below.

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there are myriad of merits that

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gives to the up to date world.

Nowadays tourists

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Nowadays, tourists

tend to visit

variety

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a variety

of countries for different purposes

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as vacations, business or even maybe for migration. Irrespective of the

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tourist

purposes

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stimulates the improvement in

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domain with

its

the thing named or in question

it

a lot of felicities.

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The first

and one of the crucial

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benefit

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benefits

of

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for dwellers is that

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simultaneously boost the rate of employed locals.

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the local people are able to earn bread and butter for their family.

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Moreover it

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Moreover, it

foster

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fosters

to decrease the segment of unemployed

people

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people, thus

thus

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the prosperity of people increases.It can be benefited from individual by gaining more and more earnings. There are some jobs that face rapid increase

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as local vendors, hotel butlers, the promotion of various restaurants and hotels, shopping malls, parks,

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sightseeing places

and

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.The indigenous people thrive to allure tourists with some recreational activities, local domestic products or

souvieners

something of sentimental value

souvenirs

. The more tourists visit the

country

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the more

country

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becomes wealthier. As I mentioned the

benefit

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of

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for an individual is indisputable fact. Another

benefit

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of

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for an individual is that people tend to communicate with foreign visitors so they exchange their culture mutually by feeling

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towards one another and learning how to respect to other people from different culture and background.

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the locals learn more information about

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different nations

and their historical backgrounds by sharing stories with one another. By exchanging different ideas, people tend to become more

symphatic

used of organisms (especially of different species) living together but not necessarily in a relation beneficial to each

symbiotic

and amiable towards foreigners.

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to

benefit

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of

tourism

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for

society

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is that the high

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countries’ people tend to be multilingual and are able to speak more than two

language

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languages

because of

high demand

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the high demand

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of

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.

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the literacy rate among people enhance and its immense lucrative impact on education is

noticiably

in a noticeable manner

noticeably

undeniable. One of the crucial point is that it should be mentioned

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gives the rise to the Gross Domestic

Product which

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Product, which

is directly

releated

being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

related

to general revenue of the state. Due to the myriad visits to the

country

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the government tends to facilitate by means of communication and transportation in favour of locals and visitors.

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the prosperity of

society

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and individuals boost by opening new hotels, restaurants, groceries and creating various recreational activities. Simply to say the more earnings the

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to

get the

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get, the

more amenities are going to be created for both dwellers and foreign visitors.It can easily be seen in the examples of developed countries

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France, USA, Arabic Emirates, England and

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. The more tourists

visits

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visit

the more

country

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is going to be developed by improving

throughly

in an exhaustive manner

thoroughly

. Improvement of

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is simultaneously equal the advancement of local business, prosperity of

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individuals

the individual

and

society

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.

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, to recapitulate, I do cogitate that

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bring

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brings

about

plethora

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the plethora

a plethora

of benefits with it. It is

indusputable

not open to question; obviously true

indisputable

that there are myriad of amenities for both dwellers and

society

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that I have already discussed by giving some specific examples.