Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The advert of the information age has bombarded the public with too much information, much of which has little connection with people’s daily life. In

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sense, some believe reading news programs on TV is a waste of time. Personally, I completely disagree with

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idea There were several reasons why being informed the latest event can still bring benefits to people. The

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important reason is that. It is advisable to be aware of the current state of affairs for the general public, which is directly related to individual life. A typical example for

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close relationship is what people should do in case of virus corona disease nowadays. Frequently reading the news reports, no matter in newspapers or on TV programs, citizens can be enabled to understand clearer the instructions and the bans of the authority

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can behave

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, without worrying to be

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noticeably prominent reason is that Those who work as scientists are always in need of

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updates

information from news reports about various fields. These range from education to economics and health care.

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, news about the current

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has pushed researchers all over the world to compete 24/7 in inventing a vaccine against it.

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, it can be argued that news is closely related to the outside world, whether common people or experts in the scientific world are taken into consideration. In conclusion, for the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly believe that, newspapers or TV programs are still significant in delivering news reports. As for how to take

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of them, it depends on individuals”s judgment, rather than just an assertion of a waste of time.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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