Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

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When some

product

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draws our attention, usually our

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reaction is to look up the

price

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. It is automatic, we want to know if we can buy it or not. It applies to any

product

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, from technology to health services, all of us give considerable importance to the

price

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, if we can get the same

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for a lower

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, indeed we will.

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, I agree with people who think that the

price

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is the most important thing.

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, when you walk through a store, usually you can see different

price

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offers, remarked in different colours to highlight over the other products.

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, many supermarkets show typical 3 for 2

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offers, or discounts up to 50%, trying to encourage the customers to buy due to their low prices.

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, the experts who work for the best brands and big companies

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believe that the

price

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is the most important thing.

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, there are some aspects that people commonly give more weight,

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as performance, quality, or experience.

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, you can not compare the new iPhone with some low-level phones, in terms of quality and performance the iPhone is much beyond.

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, you cannot compare two different health service products which give you distinct coverage. To sum up, if you are looking for products with similar characteristics, the

price

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will be very important when the final decision comes up. Despite

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price

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could become a not important thing if the products do not offer analogous aspects.

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with products that can give you an improved experience than others cheaper.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

budget
prioritize
manage finances
high quality
affordable
effective
durable
essential services
efficacy
compromise one's health
long-term savings
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