write a eaasy is education really benefit us explain it.

As a human being every peop
le hav
Suggestion
person
e
a s
Suggestion
has
ome rights.
Education
is one of them. Without
educ
ation peo
Suggestion
educating
educated
ple can not realize god blessing and world beauty.
Education
is simply knowing new thing or new lesson which improve human character and make himself more wise. Doubtlessly
education
has more benefit for us than our thinking.
Education
is not only passing clas
s or
Suggestion
a class
achieve certificate.
For instance
, it can help us improve our thinking view. Our critical situation educated people lead us. It redu
ce our
Suggestion
reduces
internal
darkness
and bad haib
ts.
an established custom
habits
For exam
ple well edu
Accept comma addition
example, well
cated people trin
g to
hard to endure
trying
change society. Their point of view
more pra
Accept comma addition
view, more
ctical than others. When fran
ce was
a republic in western Europe; the largest country wholly in Europe
France
sinking in t
he
Suggestion
into
darkness
that time some educated national hero contributes changing their society. Very
interesting thing was
Suggestion
The very interesting thing
that they are college bunked stud
ent but the
Suggestion
studying, but
studying but
studied but
ir thoughts was
eno
Suggestion
were
ugh for
cha
Suggestion
to
nge a nation as by a country. All of famous person was always direction focused on
education
. Thay
sai
Suggestion
They
That
d “if any one want to destroy any nation, only you broke their educational system”. Without
educ
ation tha
Suggestion
the education
t country have
being no
Suggestion
has been
have been
had been
doctor, teacher, engineer, leader. They automatically fall in
darkness
and can
not und
can not
cannot
erstand how to overcome
this
situation. If we compare any educated and uneducated county, we will understand impo
rtance of
Suggestion
the importance
education
. Overall,
education
are impo
rtant part of
Suggestion
an important part
our life. It is a pila
r of
a fundamental principle or practice
pillar
pillars
our nation. Everyone shou
ld gives imp
Suggestion
should give
ortance here. So they will know their limitation,
darkness
and they aslo
fin
in addition
also
d out
this
solu
ation.
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: