You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Sam How are you doing? I'm writing
this
letter to enquire about the part-job details in Canada. Well, I got
the
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admission
in
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the University of Toronto, to study
my
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masters in computer science. I have already booked tickets to travel for the
next
month. Probably, the classes will commence from the mid of September. According to the university schedule,
this
course will
last
for 2 years and the sessions would be only 2 hours from Monday to Friday.
Firstly
, as I do have enough leisure period to do some
part time
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job along with my studies.
Also
, by doing some temporary work for a couple of hours every day, it will save my accommodation fees
otherwise
it's a burden to my parents to send overseas money. Most of my classmates were planning for
the
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part time
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job.
However
, I know you're doing
a
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private work in a supermarket
since
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2 years. I hope it would be an ample experience to provide some reference at the same department store so that I feel comfortable with your support. Alternatively, you can help me out with any other platform for
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suitable office which suits me. Appreciate your generous support to get the temporary job. Best
reagrds
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regards
Shareef

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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