Some people think public library is necessary, however, others believe that the public library is useless. What is your opinion and provide with some relevant examples.

Some experts opine that it is
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worthless to use the public library
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others support
that is
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agrees
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the benefits of an information centre because it's a place for socialising and reading the
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publication
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. In
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. One merit of
book
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room is that it is a place for
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socialising. It is because, not only borrowing the
books
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can make new friends and become socially active, rather than sitting at home alone and reading online materials.
Furthermore
,
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most libraries
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group activity classes for senior residents like walking with
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in
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, arts etc.
For example
, a recent study showed that the elderly participating in
an social activities
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tend to have an active mind and less
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of suffering from mental illness. Some people prefer to read paper
books
or newspapers for free, because,
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novels are expensive to buy and an individual cannot afford its cost price,
therefore
, it is the best place to hire their choice of reading. Not only those, if you don't like any specific essay that
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, anyone can exchange anytime, so
this
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reason that textbook room is crucial.
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, people
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a huge amount
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money on
books
,
according to
a survey held among 100 people.
Hence
, not only for reading materials, human being can save their fund and spend
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some other activities as per their choice. In conclusion, a library plays a vital role in the community,
therefore
, societies need to appreciate the importance of the textbook room of their community and
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cooperate in maintaining and saving traditional
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of reading and learning
books
.
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