some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
While people struggling to survive their lives they will face a number of challenges which may good ones and some
time
bad situations Use synonyms
also
. Whereas the life should be encouraged to improve themselves to face the situation getting worse rather than always expecting better sides only.
Having incorporated with wide range of skills and competencies is one of the best solution to face successfully for that kind of worse case scenarios. For an instant nowadays people are being suffered with lack of money in hand and tired of working under less satisfactory situations. That's not a fault of them. With the current economy, people cannot depend on one job to feed their family. Investing their skills in different fields in the industries Linking Words
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therefore provide
the best opportunity for them to rise where they now have fallen. Most of the Suggestion
therefore provides
time
people learning things by looking how the things get done. As well, there are lots of chances arranged by their government as examples, workshops and training centres to enhance their hidden skills. For an instance a person who Use synonyms
doing
loading and unloading goods can learn the act that results in something coming to be
making
preparing
masks when he has free Suggestion
to prepare
time
during the period of transporting. That's how people should achieve good in bad conditions rather than Use synonyms
complaning
all of the expressing pain or dissatisfaction of resentment
complaining
complain
time
. Use synonyms
Thus
, need to understand their competencies in different fields Linking Words
instead
.
The other main factor that can defeat the bad conditions is taking precautions when they live in Linking Words
the good
conditions. Maintaining saving for difficult times and got insurance their lives in bad conditions are some of Suggestion
better
precuations
that can take place to a precautionary measure warding off impending danger or damage or injury etc.
precautions
aviod
the situation get too worst. stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
evade
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Thus when
it Accept comma addition
Thus, when
earn
excess money need to save some of them for future uses and Suggestion
earns
also
can invest them in Linking Words
another
fields to grow them into not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
big
amount. As Suggestion
bigger
example
can buy some Suggestion
an example
jewellaries
which can easily liquidate to cash one day, as it is growing the value of gold every day.
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
jewelleries
To
summary, people should try to get rid of worse case scenarios Suggestion
In
instead
of accepting it as their fate. Because not everything is permanent.Linking Words
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