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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the past twenty years, changing of
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 has become one of the biggest issues on a global scale.
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 a huge number of people are concerned about
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 issue, some people claim that we should try to live with it
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 of preventing it. In my opinion, I totally disagree with
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 opinion. The
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 reason is that people cannot always
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 their lifestyle to fit with the mother nature's changes. Indeed, human is intelligent and they can construct buildings sustain with extreme conditions like earthquake and a hurricane.
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, there will be a certain time with the ultimate people cannot find a solution to deal with temperature development.
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, trying to live with
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change
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 is just a temporary solution. Another reason is that preventing
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 is not only for the present, but only for the future. Recent research has shown that there will be no human living on the Earth within 100 years because of natural disasters. In fact, there are already less places for human to live than before due to the rising of sea level caused by
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change
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. If people just only find a way to live with
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, the end of the human era will occur in the very near future and it is so selfish if contemporary people just think for themselves than for the future of their children. Changing a way of living to comfort with
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 definitely cannot prevent it, but only cause the sooner human extinction. In conclusion, I believe that addressing with
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 of avoiding it is necessary to protect the environment as well as the Earth.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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