Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people believe that young adults ought to go to college in order to advance their education,
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, students who start working
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of going to university have demonstrated better experience because it is one of the most essential elements to be a successful person.
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a tour guide after graduating high school have been able to speak many languages since she has travelled and learnt during her excursion.
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, it is the best way to save money as going to college would cost amo
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hereas, people beginning to do a job would be able to achieve experienced job in the future. It seems to me that continue to study to extend majors would show better results.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • higher education
  • vocational training
  • skillset
  • employment landscape
  • economic contributions
  • hands-on experience
  • critical thinking skills
  • practical knowledge
  • tuition fees
  • trade professions
  • essential workforce
  • academic qualifications
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