Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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, students who start working instead
of going to university have demonstrated better experience because it is one of the most essential elements to be a successful person. For instance
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fortune.
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