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Band 8.5

You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions

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Dear Mr. Smith, I hope
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 email finds you well. I am writing in response to your advertisement for part-time summer work at your hotel. I am particularly interested in the opportunity and would like to provide some information about my experience,
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 seek
further
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 details about the position. I have previously worked as a receptionist in a four-star hotel for two years, where I gained valuable experience in customer service, handling bookings, and assisting with guest inquiries.
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, I have worked part-time in a restaurant, which improved my ability to work in a fast-paced environment
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 maintaining attention to detail. These roles have equipped me with the skills necessary to contribute positively to your hotel’s operations. Could you kindly provide more details about the responsibilities of the role? Specifically, I would like to know whether it involves interacting directly with guests or if it is more focused on administrative tasks. Understanding the nature of the work would help me better prepare to meet the expectations.
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, I would appreciate it if you could share information regarding the working hours, remuneration, and any benefits associated with the position. I am eager to ensure that I can align my schedule effectively with the requirements of the job. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your response and hope to discuss how I can contribute to your team. Yours sincerely, John Doe

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task achievement
Consider adding a brief introduction about why you are interested in the role to enhance the personal touch of your letter.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear focus on a single idea to improve clarity—your second paragraph could split into two for your experiences.
task achievement
Excellent use of a formal tone, suitable for a job application letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
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