Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Rubish
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Rubbish
production
has been increasing
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is increasing
has increased
very fast lately. People produce
surprisigly high amout
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a surprisingly high amount
surprisigly high amount
surprisingly high amount
surprisingly high amout
of
trash which
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trash, which
affect our lives and a life of our planet. There
is
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are
a lot of reasons of that process.
Firstly
, these days a lot of goods are cheap and easy to get
for
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to
most of the people.
However
, recent researches shown that the richer communities produce more
trash
than the poor ones. People earning more money, buy more, all types of goods.
For example
, they can afford renovations, so they simply throw away the old
furnitures
furnishings that make a room or other area ready for occupancy
furniture
and replace them with the new ones, even if the old ones are still able to be used.
For instance
, nowadays a bunch of products
are packed
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is packed
with too many pieces of foil and paper.
For example
, a toothpaste in the tube is packed with the paper box and very often
wraped
covered with or as if with clothes or a wrap or cloak
wrapped
in the foil. Those
packeges
a collection of things wrapped or boxed together
packages
are thrown away right after purchased which leads to make more and more rubbish. The
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should take the right steps to reduce the number of producing
trash
, recycling is one of them. It should be required in every country to segregate the waste, which make the recycling easier and faster. Most of segregated waste can be processed and reused. Another thing that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should do, is to introduce the deposit for bottles, both plastic and glasses. That step has been already taken in some countries,
such
us
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
Norway, Sweden or Germany and it works very well. People don't throw the bottles away, they collect them, give it back and get
deposit
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a deposit
the deposit
back. It save money and reduce the
number
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amount
of
trash
.
Moreover
, some
asian
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
countries use plastic bottles as a method of payment for metro tickets. The have machines, where they can insert a bottle
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of cash or card and buy a ticket.
Thus
, there is a lot of ways that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
can help to reduce amount of
trash
. In conclusion, the number of
procuded
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producing
produced
rubbish is one of the biggest problems in our world. It
affect
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affects
especially our planet.
However
, some countries already pay attention to
this
problem, more is needed to stop producing
trash
.

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