The rise of instant foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages and disadvantages with this trend.

The busy life stye of
meny
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
people around the world has convenient by the growth of junk foods over the past few years.
Although
this
trend has helped people to manage their
time
,
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,
it might cause to some health problem as well. In
this
essay, I will discuss both the sides of consuming fast foods. In the modern world, people often face difficulties with
time
managementwhile
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management while
working with so many agendas. For these
type
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types
of people, instant foods have helped them by
lessen
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lessening
time
on cooking.
For example
, with the newly introduced easy rice
,
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,
anyone can cook fried rice within 5 minutes.
Furthermore
, there is no need to have any idea about cooking to prepare instant foods. Even a child can prepare it without the help of an adult. Because all the steps are mentioned in the packet and just want to follow instruction is needed.
For instance
, canned chicken curry tins which are available in
super markets
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarkets
need only to heat without adding anything.
On the other hand
, use of fast foods for a long period of
time
might cause to health problems.
this
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This
is mainly with the ingredients, most are
articifial
contrived by art rather than nature
artificial
sweetneres
something added to foods to make them taste sweeter
sweeteners
. In
this
case number of people are suffering from cancer, diabetes,
obeysity
more than average fatness
obesity
etc... Another shortcoming of these fast foods is the high level of malnutrition among children who use these type of foods. Most of the children are
addcted
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
to the taste of fast foods
,
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,
so that they are
refucing
show unwillingness towards
refusing
reducing
fresh vegetables,
such
as, the level of nutrition of a balance diet can not get from
fast food meal
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a fast food meal
. To conclude, the rise of instant foods
help
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helps
people to manage their busy life with the
time
and on the other way,
consumption
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the consumption
of these kind of foods badly effect to the health of them.

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