Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The question of whether
nor
not we should try to save endangered Correct word choice
or
species
is definitely a controversial one
. Although
some people argue that these animals
are not useful and we should let them die in the same way that many others ( like the dinosaurs ) have die
out before, Wrong verb form
died
i
personally believe that endangered Change the capitalization
I
species
are actually worth saving. There tow
main reasons for Correct your spelling
two
this
. First of all, it is important for us to recognise the key role that endangered species
play in nature. The environment
is made is
for fragile ecosystems, whereUnnecessary verb
apply
plans
and Correct your spelling
plants
animals
all rely on one
another to survive. If one
animal disappear
or a new Correct subject-verb agreement
disappears
one
is introduced, it upsets the balance of nature and affects other animals
above and below it tin
the food chain by changing the Correct your spelling
in
environment
that they live in. These changes often come back to affect us in ways that we do not expect. In the same way that rabbits introduced Australia
by the British now eat the plants that many native Change preposition
to Australia
animals
need to live and ruin farmer’s crops, the extinction of a predatory animal would allow its prey to reproduce out of control and would probably cause plagues. Thus
, because environment
change is actually a danger to us, we clearly have an interest in saving endangered Replace the word
environmental
species
. However
, maybe the strongest argument for saving endangered species
is that all life is valuable in and of itself. Even of
these Correct your spelling
if
animals
do not have any practical use, they should still be saved. Furthermore
, because human activity has destroyed the natural living environment
of many endangered species
, we should do the best we can to save them. To conclude
, i
feel that endangered Change the capitalization
I
animal
are indeed worth saving. They not only Fix the agreement mistake
animals
their
own valueAdd a missing verb
have their
,
but the balance of nature would be disturbed if that died out.Remove the comma
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite