In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, a number of individuals interested in conducting research about their family origin. There are several reasons for
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tendency and in my opinion,
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it has positive aspects, it is a negative development.
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with, there are some major reasons why genealogy is prevalent. The
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reason is that people are curious about their ancestors. They eager to learn where they come from, how they make a living , etc
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, if they learn their great-grandfather is a illu
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trious figure or a noble, they could be super excited and proud.
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, people attempt to investigate their own family in order to check their health. By doing so, they can be aware of whether their ancestors suffer from any hereditary ailments and figure out how to prevent illness.
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, I believe that cons of
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tendency outweigh pros.
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of all, conducting family origin can affect adversely on life attitude.
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, if a juvenile learn
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r she might want to follow his grandfather’s life experience.
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, investigating ancestors can be money consuming. People can spend
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money on,
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, education
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of family research. To sum up, interest and health control is major reasons of family investigating and it have detrim
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a detrimental effect
fe attitude and budget.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
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