The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015

The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015
The table illustrates the proportion of
forest covered
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land in four
countries
(
Australia
, New Zealand,
Chile
,
Brazil
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and Brazil
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)
during
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1990 and 2005 years and estimated figures for 2015. In general, in all years the highest
percentage
was in Brazil,
however
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the lowest had
Chile
and
Australia
. Actually,
Australia
and Brazil’s percentages declined over the period,
while
Chile
and New Zealand filled land
by
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forest.
According to
the diagram, in Brazil declined, the number of lands covered by
forest
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forests
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from
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62.2% in 1990 to 57.2% in 2005 and projected in 2015 to 53.5%.,
also
it was the highest
percentage
between
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among
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the other three
countries
. In 1990, the lowest amount of
percentage
had
Chile
, which was 20.4%,
while
in 2005
Chile
increased the area to 21.5%,
moreover
at that period of time
Australia
had the lowest
percentage
by
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21.3%. In detail, among
three
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countries
only New Zealand improved over the years from 28.8% increased to 31% and
estimated
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the estimated
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in 2015 rise to 32.3%, because of which, among
countries
were in
the
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second
place.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, australia, chile, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deforestation
  • Afforestation
  • Reforestation
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Conservation
  • Sustainable development
  • Deforestation rate
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic growth
  • Land use
  • Climate change
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Natural resources
  • Forest conservation policies
  • Barren land
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Renewable resources
  • Ecological footprint
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