The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005 with estimated figures for 2015
The table illustrates the proportion of
forest covered
land in four Add a hyphen
forest-covered
countries
(Australia
, New Zealand, Chile
, Brazil
) Correct word choice
and Brazil
during
1990 and 2005 years and estimated figures for 2015.
In general, in all years the highest Change preposition
between
percentage
was in Brazil, however
the lowest had Add a comma
,however
Chile
and Australia
. Actually, Australia
and Brazil’s percentages declined over the period, while
Chile
and New Zealand filled land by
forest.
Change preposition
with
According to
the diagram, in Brazil declined, the number of lands covered by forest
Fix the agreement mistake
forests
from
62.2% in 1990 to 57.2% in 2005 and projected in 2015 to 53.5%., Add a missing verb
was from
also
it was the highest percentage
between
the other three Change preposition
among
countries
. In 1990, the lowest amount of percentage
had Chile
, which was 20.4%, while
in 2005 Chile
increased the area to 21.5%, moreover
at that period of time Australia
had the lowest percentage
by
21.3%.
In detail, among Change preposition
at
three
Correct article usage
the three
countries
only New Zealand improved over the years from 28.8% increased to 31% and estimated
in 2015 rise to 32.3%, because of which, among Correct article usage
the estimated
countries
were in the
Correct article usage
apply
second
place.Submitted by asilaarabova03 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, australia, chile, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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