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A PERSON'S WORTH NOWADAYS SEEMS TO BE JUDGED ACCORDING TO SOCIAL STATUS AND MATERIAL POSSESSIONS. OLD-FASHIONED VALUES, SUCH AS HONOUR, KINDNESS AND TRUST, NO LONGER SEEM IMPORTANT. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION?

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It is often considered that now treating the individuals due to their social
status
 and material possessions dominates in the society in comparison with passe importance like honour, kindness and trust. I completely agree with
this
 position and think that
this
 condition frequently comes across in an e
very day
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
life.
First
 of all, as society develops, people measure human dignity by wealth and social
status
.
In other words
, in most c
ountries there
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countries, there
are social hierarchies and inhabitants are mainly organised into different levels of social
status
 from highest to lowest.
Therefore
, well-to-do residents are always r
espected even
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respected, even
though they are not knowledgeable, trustful or kind.
Hence
,
although
 the poor are clever or f
rank they
Suggestion
frankly, they
frankly they
are not appreciated by the rich.
For instance
, if the wealthy person's son loves the poor one's daughter, the boy's parents never agree to their marriage because of their prestige as well as the distinction between their pedigrees.
Secondly
, social hierarchies
also
 influence on h
umans' work
Suggestion
the humans' work
and study. It means that unless someone is prosperous, they encounter many difficulties while finding j
ob
Suggestion
a job
or studying. Because their experiences and skills are not estimated properly. So that they have a slight chance compared to wealthy heirs. To illustrate, the youth of South Korea study at specialised schools and colleges that are separated according to their social
status
. Provided that one of the poor studies with affluent peers at one school together, the rich always outrage them. By way of conclusion, I strongly believe that categorizing the humans due to their social
status
 or material possessions is not p
roper way.
Suggestion
the proper way
a proper way
 Inhabitant's positive characteristics are much more crucial rather than wealth.
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