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More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution

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Ever since the industrial revolution and rise in economic standards, a vast majority of the world's population prefers driving their own vehicles. In
this
 essay, I shall suggest a number of problems,
this
 trend may have on our lives as well as the environment, along with a solution. With the recent economic avalanche, accompanied by the rise in living standards, the number of cars running on the roads has drastically increased. Owning to the technical advancements and financial facilities provided by the government, people are now able to purchase their private commute.
However
,
this
 development has many detrimental impacts on our life.
Firstly
, with many cars running on the roads, the number of accidents
have significantly increased
Suggestion
has significantly increased
had significantly increased
.
For example
, a recent study published by Oxford University illustrated that, more than 50% of world's total death are the result of car accidents.
Also
, with many cars running on the roads, people are more likely to stick in long traffic jams,
as a result
, people may struggle with reaching their destination on time.
Secondly
, smoke released from these vehicles is the main cause of global warming and ozone layer depletion. Due to which, more people are now suffering from life threatening diseases
such
 as Cancer and Asthma.
In addition
,
this
 development is pushing people more towards living an unhealthy, sedentary life,
therefore
 people are more likely to suffer from mental and physical distress.
However
,
on the other hand
, by making few changes in our lifestyle, it is now possible, to eliminate these impacts. By using public transportation, the amount of traffic on the roads will significantly reduce.
Thus
, apart from making the road safer,
this
 approach will drastically drop the level of air pollution.
Hence
, the government should make some huge investments, in order to improve the efficiency and quality of these services. In conclusion, if the above steps are taken efficiently, it is safe to say that the negative impact of
this
 sophisticated modern technology can be ameliorated.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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