Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provided information about the percentage of people aged 25-34
either
Correct pronoun usage
who either
own
or Wrong verb form
owned
rent
a house in the UK between 2004 and 2014.
Wrong verb form
rented
Overall
, home owners
Correct your spelling
homeowners
ecperienced
Correct your spelling
experienced
experience
an
downward trend Change the article
a
while
renters showed an upward tren
Correct your spelling
trend
through
the period. Change preposition
throughout
Although
renters initially
had a lower rate, they outraced homeowners at the end
of the period.
Percentage
of Correct article usage
The percentage
home owners
was about 58% in 2004, being higher than Correct your spelling
homeowners
renters
rate by approximately 30%. Correct article usage
the renters
Then
it went down slightly to about 56% in 2006 and went up to 57% in 2007. Next
, the figure showed a dramatically
decrease to almost 52% in the year 2011 and remained virtually unchanged in 2012. Change the adverb
dramatic
Then
it continued to decline steadily to about 36% at the end
of the period.
The number of people renting was about 20% in the year 2004 and increased to about 33% in 2005 and remained consistently
in 2006. Change the word
consistent
However
, the figure experienced a
significant Correct article usage
apply
a
steady growth during the Correct article usage
apply
next
5 years, reaching around 41% in 2011. It remained stable in 2012,
and continued to Remove the comma
apply
rocketed
to 47% in the year 2014, Change the form of the verb
rocket
outraced
the rate of Wrong verb form
outracing
home owners
.Correct your spelling
homeowners
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, next".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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