Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Computer
is one of the most important part of our modern society. While some people prefer their children don'
t
work with
computer
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computers
the computer
every day, others find some benefits in daily working
by
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with
computer
. I agree with the
first
view. So, I am going to explain my opinion.
First
of all, working with
computer
for
long
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a long time
time
during a day
can makes
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can make
a bad effect on eyes of children.
look
perceive with attention; direct one's gaze towards
Look
at the screen of the
computer
has a lot of
sid
a place within a region identified relative to a center or reference location
side
Sid
effect
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effects
for children's eyes. If we didn'
t
attention on that, it has a bad effect on their health.
In addition
,
this
is on parents’ duty to care about children.
For example
, my friend’s child, played with
computer
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computers
the computer
every day for
long
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a long time
time
. His parents didn'
t
care that one.
Finally
, after couples of years they understood their son needs to the wear the glasses. It was deep trouble for
boys
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the boys
who was 7 years.
Second
, children by working on
computer
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the computer
computers
a computer
, loos the exercise
time
.
Therefore
, they can'
t
do move more and start to fat. Children when play or work with PC, enjoy eating during that.
Consequently
, be fat is
make
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making
the huge problem for them in future.
For instance
, my brother had
got
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gotten
this
problem.
until
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Until
now that he is 20 years, he couldn'
t
lose his weigh. According, I think in child
age we
Accept comma addition
age, we
should focus on some reasons which help to going fat and stop them. In conclusion, I would like to restate my opinion about don'
t
daily work with
PC
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a PC
. Due to heath
body
Accept comma addition
body, such
such
as effecting on the eyes and losing the exercise’s
time
and start
to
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with
fat, I believe that
computer
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the computer
a computer
is a significant factor here.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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