Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?
Computer
is one of the most important part of our modern society. While some people prefer their children don't
work with computer
every day, others find some benefits in daily working Suggestion
computers
the computer
by
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with
computer
. I agree with the first
view. So, I am going to explain my opinion.
First
of all, working with computer
for long
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a long time
time
during a day can makes
a bad effect on eyes of children. Suggestion
can make
look
at the screen of the perceive with attention; direct one's gaze towards
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computer
has a lot of sid
a place within a region identified relative to a center or reference location
side
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effect
for children's eyes. If we didn'Suggestion
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attention on that, it has a bad effect on their health. In addition
, this
is on parents’ duty to care about children. For example
, my friend’s child, played with computer
every day for Suggestion
computers
the computer
long
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a long time
time
. His parents didn't
care that one. Finally
, after couples of years they understood their son needs to the wear the glasses. It was deep trouble for boys
who was 7 years.
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the boys
Second
, children by working on computer
, loos the exercise Suggestion
the computer
computers
a computer
time
. Therefore
, they can't
do move more and start to fat. Children when play or work with PC, enjoy eating during that. Consequently
, be fat is make
the huge problem for them in future. Suggestion
making
For instance
, my brother had got
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gotten
this
problem. until
now that he is 20 years, he couldn'Suggestion
Until
t
lose his weigh. According, I think in child age we
should focus on some reasons which help to going fat and stop them.
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daily work with PC
. Due to heath Suggestion
a PC
body
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body, such
such
as effecting on the eyes and losing the exercise’s time
and start to
fat, I believe that Suggestion
with
computer
is a significant factor here.Suggestion
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