With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be open up to access more resources. To what extend do you agree?

As the demand in the

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is increasing for

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and gas, the undiscovered reservoirs should be opened up globally. In my opinion, I disagree with the access to the untapped reservoirs as it will eventually lead to more

pollution

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and environmental disturbances. As

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and gas, the

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increase in the

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. Theses natural resources are the main source of energy in

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and many large scale industries depend on them in day to day life.

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instance transportation

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industry is one of the biggest consumer of

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in the

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, as well as the source of

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too. The

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industries flourish and benefits the

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world, but

at the cost of

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.

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increasing

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has started having an impact on the environment as well as the human beings.

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, as the demand of these natural resources is going to increase and soon there will be no more deposits in the

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so there should be an end to

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never ending demand and the people can focus on renewable resources, which will lead to a healthier environment.

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, excessive mining is causing imbalance in nature. As the result of human extraction the

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and gas ores are about to run out which took millions of years to form and contributed to keeping the atmospheric balance. The

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extraction of natural resources is leading to a global rise of

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temperatures, which

indeed is affecting the icebergs in Antarctica and will eventually lead to increased sea levels.

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will impact many small countries and

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near the sea and lead to devastation.

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, nothing will be left for future generations. In conclusion, the global access to these untouched areas will lead to environmental disturbances which indeed will lead to problems for mankind.