Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad think?

A lot of people like to wear fashionable garments, one of the reasons which I suppose is mainly contributed towards
this
trend is the Fashion Industry
.
Accept space
.
Now being one of the dominant Industries of our time, it influences a lot of publicity. The popularity and publicity of the brands through the television advertisements create keen interest in new generation to follow
this
growing trend. The other factor is famous actors which are often seen wearing these fashionable clothes in their daily routine
also
makes an impression. Nowadays, even buying these clothes is easy, they are well priced and are affordable so attracts crowds. They are available on many websites and in all malls
thus
increasing the accessibility to public. I my opinion,
thisthis
denotes a person or thing
this
this this
is a bad thing because people get indulged in fashion
as a result
of it, spend more money than their budgets.
This
indeed leads to overspending and putting many people in dept.
This
can cause unnecessary stress and
moreover
, add to their problems.
In addition
, it is the wastage as the fashion keeps on changing and the clothes become outdated and only adding on clusters of clothes in wardrobe ant
thus
, wasting the money which can be used for many essential items.
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