The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people for work in the future.

In
this
day and age, it is widely acknowledged that the job market is ever-evolving. The current
industry
structure is threatened as the local economy has moved from industries that rely on physical labour for those with
favor
promote over another
favour
fever
fewer
brains. In
this
way, I personally agree with
this
premise that many people are unable to continue the same job.
Industry
structure is more likely to be close to occupations. Because, compared to the past, the primary
industry
has tended to focus on agricultures,
then
begun to the
second
industry
was in light and heavy industries, the tertiary
industry
with developed countries are related to service field. Presumably, it might be influenced the consumer attitude, as changing business.
For example
, there are a lot of people riding a bike in previous time. So those who can fix machine had a quite important role in previous time.
However
, with the increasing of used cars, the proportion of repairmen had gone. As
such
, the reason why people could not keep their jobs due to being a changeable
industry
revolution. On top of that, because of automation of some industries that lead to people need to more brain rather than physical labours.
For instance
, robots will be replaced human work.
consequently
Suggestion
Consequently
, unfortunately, the majority of workers do not need to work anymore. For these reasons, a lot of occupations have completely a difference in the upcoming years. All of considered the thing that education at school should teach more professional skill that can find the promising job, and government
also
provide children to various experience.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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