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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #hobbies
Some people think the hobbies can help pleasure from
difficult situation
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a difficult situation
difficult situations
 and they believe that.
This
 is agreeing with following of statement and through
this
 essay will evidence some example at the details.
First
 of all,
this
 is
true statement
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a true statement
 that people will realise their time and that time can help more and more passing with interesting
,
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,
enjoyable
,
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,
memor-able
worth remembering
memorable
 more and more the hobbies passing with playing games or cooking something as well as they take to glad from them and sometimes take relaxation form hobbies.
while
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While
 people take encourage and motivation for living which is
this
 so beautiful In the era.
In addition
, it can be brightly when they do
of their hobbies,
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, their hobbies,
 while
this
 gives more pleasure moods to them.
On the other hand
, there are some difficult happens collected with hobbies.
However
, some people have their purpose in the life and their hobbies impact their life.
For example
, some people live to achieve earning so much money,
thus
 they haven't enough time for family
,
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,
friends
,
Accept space
,
hobbies and other things,
therefore
, they don't find certain of hobbies and don't understand it's enjoyment. But, the starting of hobbies
have
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has
 some
difficults
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
at
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in
of
 learning
of
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about
 it. I think the hobbies have per
people which
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people, which
 the living is in the earth and they take amusing mood and relaxed
from
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about
 it. To sum up, in
this
 essay have hobbies about enjoyable and
difficults
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
,
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,
 and more people take pleasure mood and it need to rest some problems
,
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,
work and
anoathers
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unique challenge
  • personal growth
  • mastery
  • accomplishment
  • demanding
  • thrill of achievement
  • pastimes
  • fostering
  • sense of community
  • mindfulness
  • stress relief
  • mental break
  • daily stressors
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