Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People
have different opinions about saving and protecting wild Use synonyms
animals
. A group of Use synonyms
people
believe that all wild Use synonyms
animals
should be protected Use synonyms
while
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others
think that we should only preserve several ones. The following paragraphs will discuss both views in detail, but I personally believe that all wild Use synonyms
animals
should be conserved.
For a number of reasons, some Use synonyms
people
believe that not all wild Use synonyms
animals
should be preserved. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they believe that the overpopulation of wild Linking Words
animals
could become a threat Use synonyms
for
our existence. Change preposition
to
For example
, should the population of Zebra and Wildebeest in Africa Linking Words
is
protected, Correct subject-verb agreement
be
then
the existence of these Linking Words
animals
might become overpopulated, and Use synonyms
as a result
, they might explore the farming areas in Africa. Linking Words
Secondly
, conserving wild Linking Words
animals
requires a large amount of money. They believe that these funds should be allocated Use synonyms
for
humanity issues, as many Change preposition
to
third world
countries are still struggling against starvation and deathly diseases.
Add a hyphen
third-world
However
, Linking Words
others
think that all wild Use synonyms
animals
must be protected. The main Use synonyms
reason
behind Use synonyms
this
view is that all of the wild Linking Words
animals
Use synonyms
plays
an important role in the ecosystem. Should there be one of these Change the verb form
play
animals
extinct, Use synonyms
then
the ecosystem would be unbalanced and it might have a catastrophic effect on the environment. Another Linking Words
reason
is that the existence of these wild Use synonyms
animal
is beneficial for human beings. Scientists have found out that some wild Fix the agreement mistake
animals
animals
could be used as a medical treatment, Use synonyms
such
as the blood of a snake which can be used to heal skin diseases. There is another Linking Words
reason
that forms the opinion that all wild Use synonyms
animals
are important and should be equally protected. The Use synonyms
reason
explains that if we protect some selected wild Use synonyms
animals
, Use synonyms
others
might Use synonyms
get
extinct and Verb problem
go
then
we will damage the biodiversity of the world.
In conclusion, a number of Linking Words
people
believe that we should protect all wild Use synonyms
animals
, Use synonyms
while
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others
think that we should only preserve some of them. Both groups have their own opinions, but I strongly believe that we should conserve all wild Use synonyms
animals
.Use synonyms
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