ecotourism has advantages as well as disadvantages . do you agree?

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ecotourism
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Ecotourism
is the visiting of people to pristine places
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although
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Although
it brings immeasurable benefits for
people but
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people, but
there are
also
some dire drawbacks of it
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one
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One
of the biggest advantage of it is
boost
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a boost
in
national economy
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the national economy
of a nation
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As
ecotourists
visit a place they need food and accommodation facilities which are provided by indigenous people by establishing hotels and shops.
the
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The
use of domestic products by the visitors, it has
direct impact
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a direct impact
on increasing GDP.
BEsides
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Besides
Beside
this
, it helps tourists to visit areas of natural beauty, see animals habitat and meet members of
local community
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the local community
local communities
which help them to increase their awareness of conserving atmosphere and avoiding waste
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AS a result
, it encourages them to live more sustainable at home
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Finally
, it enables people to learn about the flora and fauna of a specific location
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since
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Since
every place has its own identity with dense trees as well as animals, people get a chance to know about them in depth.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ecotourism
  • Sustainability
  • Conservation
  • Local economies
  • Cultural exchange
  • Environmental degradation
  • Cultural disruption
  • Sustainable practices
  • Responsible management
  • Tourism growth
  • Biodiversity
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly
  • Indigenous communities
  • Wildlife preservation
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