Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While some people are of the opinion that humans should close every zoo because of its cruelty, others believe that the zoos are ideal places to save endangered animals. Admittedly, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy which will be elaborated in

this

essay followed by a reasonable conclusion.

To begin

with, some individuals believe that zoo animals are kept in artificial environments.

In other words

, animals are kept in cages and

also

they have limited space

that is

a particular difference between living at the zoos and their homeland. Because they used to be free and move towards every side as they want,

hence

, it does not belong to their desire when they are preserved at the zoos. Even though they are fed by employees due to the schedule during the day and it causes to lose their freedom to hunt for food.

Besides

,

zoos

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zoo

zoo's

exhibit animals with the aim of making money. There is another side of the issue critics oppose to that zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation. It means that while happening deleterious affairs

such

as deforestation, global warming, air pollution and hunting, the risk for

animals

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animal

multiplies significantly.

Therefore

, some species of animals

are not now existing

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do not now exist

.

Thus

, the zoos aid to preserve endangered species as much they can through starting man-made living conditions

up

Accept comma addition

up, although

although

they

can not

can not

cannot

be the similar with natural one. Their efforts lessen the extinction of animals. By way of conclusion,

although

it is generally thought by many that the zoos are

vicious so that

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so vicious that

they should be shut, the idea of protecting animals by the zoos is confirmed by others as much beneficial way. In my view, becoming liberated for animals would be every-sided adequate.