Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years

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Over the
last
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few years
great amount
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a great amount
of boutiques in a commercial
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
have ceased
Suggestion
has ceased
their activities. The reason behind
this
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trend is
lack
Suggestion
the lack
of cost recovery due to various factors. In my opinion, it is a positive development because goods that were sold in main
street
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shops were expensive and were not affordable for an average person. The main factor playing role in
disappearance
Suggestion
the disappearance
of high
street
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shops is that the prices for the property in the business
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
of a city are going through the roof.
As a result
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, business owners are not able to cover their expenses despite the fact that they mostly sell brands. In fact, average customers cannot afford them and tend to order products via the Internet because online-shops have significant
variety
Suggestion
variations
variation
variability
of product as well as delivery and lower-prices.
Consequently
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, modern boutiques become
uncompetitive
Suggestion
and business owners forced to close their high
street
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shops and search for another way to fill a market niche. From my perspective,
this
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trend is advantageous for individuals and
economy
Suggestion
the economy
as a whole.
First
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, switch to the Internet shopping means higher asset
turnover which
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turnover, which
is beneficial for the economy. In terms of customers, clothes and other goods from the Internet shop have lower prices and wider variety.
Thus
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, people are able to purchase something affordable and appealing to them.
For example
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, I wanted to buy a new dress from natural fabric and I was not able to purchase it in ordinary shops because it was too expensive. Later I had ordered few dresses online and
finally
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bought a gorgeous dress. I totally enjoyed by
this
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experience, especially because it did not consume too much time and there was not need to go to a market or a mall. In conclusion, having considered the reasons of
shuttering
Suggestion
the shuttering
of main
street
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shops, I believe that it is a positive development.
This
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is because
processes
Suggestion
the processes
of shopping became more comfortable and affordable.

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