Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years
Over the
last
few years Linking Words
great amount
of boutiques in a commercial Suggestion
a great amount
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
have ceased
their activities. The reason behind Suggestion
has ceased
this
trend is Linking Words
lack
of cost recovery due to various factors. In my opinion, it is a positive development because goods that were sold in main Suggestion
the lack
street
shops were expensive and were not affordable for an average person.
The main factor playing role in Use synonyms
disappearance
of high Suggestion
the disappearance
street
shops is that the prices for the property in the business Use synonyms
center
of a city are going through the roof. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
As a result
, business owners are not able to cover their expenses despite the fact that they mostly sell brands. In fact, average customers cannot afford them and tend to order products via the Internet because online-shops have significant Linking Words
variety
of product as well as delivery and lower-prices. Suggestion
variations
variation
variability
Consequently
, modern boutiques become Linking Words
uncompetitive
and business owners forced to close their high Suggestion
street
shops and search for another way to fill a market niche.
From my perspective, Use synonyms
this
trend is advantageous for individuals and Linking Words
economy
as a whole. Suggestion
the economy
First
, switch to the Internet shopping means higher asset Linking Words
turnover which
is beneficial for the economy. In terms of customers, clothes and other goods from the Internet shop have lower prices and wider variety. Accept comma addition
turnover, which
Thus
, people are able to purchase something affordable and appealing to them. Linking Words
For example
, I wanted to buy a new dress from natural fabric and I was not able to purchase it in ordinary shops because it was too expensive. Later I had ordered few dresses online and Linking Words
finally
bought a gorgeous dress. I totally enjoyed by Linking Words
this
experience, especially because it did not consume too much time and there was not need to go to a market or a mall.
In conclusion, having considered the reasons of Linking Words
shuttering
of main Suggestion
the shuttering
street
shops, I believe that it is a positive development. Use synonyms
This
is because Linking Words
processes
of shopping became more comfortable and affordable.Suggestion
the processes
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