The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The given bar chart illustrates
top
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the top
countries
producing and consuming electricity
in 2014.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that China and the US are the two countries
that consume the most electricity
. And Germany, which has more electricity
consumption
than a
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production
.
At first glance, China registered for the first position with about 5400 billion
kWh
generated and 5322 billion
kWh
consumed. The second
place belonged to the United States with the
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electricity
production
of nearly 4100 billion
kWh
and consumption
of 1038 billion
kWh
. And the third
place was Russia with production
and consumption
figures of 1057 billion
kWh
and 1038 billion
kWh
.
The next
positions in turn belonged to Japan with 936.2 for production
and 856.7 kWh
for consumption
. Next
was India and Canada accounted for the 5th and 6th position, India generated 871 billion
kWh
and used nearly 700 kWh
, while
the country of maple leaves was significantly lower with 618.9 billion
kWh
of production
and nearly 500 kWh
of consumption
. France and Brazil registered for the 7th and 8th, both countries
had the figure of electricity
generation was around 530 billion
kWh
and 460 kWh
used. In the end, the two countries
ranked the lowest were Germany and Republic
of Korea, with Correct article usage
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the
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production
and consuming
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consumption
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billion
kWh
and 582.5 kWh
, respectively. And 485 billion
kWh
of generating and 449.5 of using was the figure of Korea.Submitted by pnuphuong05 on
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