The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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electricity
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At first glance, China registered for the first position with about 5400 Use synonyms
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kWh
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place belonged to the United States with Linking Words
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of nearly 4100 Use synonyms
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of 1038 Use synonyms
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figures of 1057 Use synonyms
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was India and Canada accounted for the 5th and 6th position, India generated 871 Linking Words
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