Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of the most controversial issues today relates to

gorvernment’s

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

policy in the array of modern artists’s high payment. Personally, I partly agree with

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trend. One of the strongest arguments against the limit of

artist’s salary

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the artist’s salary

is attributed to the dependence of the aesthetic sensory ability. To clarify, most of abstract art’s adorers are not much, but they are willing to pay a

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unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope

huge

sums

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sum

of money for being the owner of contemporary picture. A

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point which needs to be considered is the wide range of amount of time for the product’s implementation. Truly, some modern artists confess that sometimes the stretching progress, for about 3-5 years, is inevitable to ensure the flawless meticulousness. As the consequence, the extremely high price is affordable for contemporary art lover. By

constrast

the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared

contrast

, some arguments that support the policy of limit the payment of several contemporary artists. The most typical of these is the rampant corruption among legislative officials and some industry empire. The convict can operate money laundering activity to ensure the figure of

ligalization

the act of making lawful

legalization

legalisation

of

thier

of them or themselves

their

income via extremely high payment for modern art.

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, government must take some actions immediately to handle

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problem. In conclusion, I tend to believe that the modern artists have the right to obtain a huge amount of money for

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of them or themselves

their

work but

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work, but

authority should take some steps to ensure other artist are not

struggle

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struggling

to make

living

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a living

. It would be more desirable if the issue is considered

prudently

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prudent

and thoroughly.