The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity

organization spent and received in 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts represent the amount of expense and revenue of charity
organization
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in Kazakhstan for the year 2019. As an
overall
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trend , the majority of the revenue was made by donated food ,
whereas
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the most of expense was spent on program services. As can be seen in the first diagram, the income of the charity organization was received from six different sources. Among them, the highest part was earned by donated food, which accounted for 86.6 % ,
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the income generated from community and
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was significantly lower and comprised 10.4% and 2.2%. The lowest part of
revenue
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was covered by remaining sources
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as government grants and investment and
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totalled only 0.8 %.
According to
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the
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diagram, the finance of charity
organization
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were spent
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three different purposes. The biggest portion of them was consumed by program services ,which constituted 96%. And the expenses by fundraising and management and general
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comprised 2.6% and 1.6% of the total amount.

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