Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not international cooperation should tackle to the alarming issues has been a matter of debate since the beginning of the twenty-
century. While there are a lot of benefits of the international organization, I would argue that it is better to address some difficulties in its own country by the national cooperation. In the
place, there are some reasons to believe that global collaboration has responsibility for finding a solution to emerge.
For instance
, global warming, natural disaster, infectious disease may have a negative impact on the global scale.
, they usually require a lot of money from financial resource of worldwide organizations.
In addition
to that, fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out, people are cutting down enormous areas of rainforest and destroying wildlife habitats. The international cooperation should introduce laws to limit emissions from factories, invest in renewable energy from solar, wind and water power and natural areas and wild animals should be protected. In the
place, many kinds of urgent matters cannot be solved by international association but
by national assistances.
For example
, educational issues do not need action from other areas. If government can solve important problems like building educational system, having a good quality education, individuals will
trust in the government and have an obligation to themselves. The other reason is the distinct conditions of every country. As each nation has own difficulties related to culture, climate, politics which can only tackle by their government. In conclusion,
international collaboration brings a great number of benefits to solve immediate matters on global scales, I believe that national organization should
contribute their efforts to improving these problems on the national scale.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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