Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern era, hospitality and tourism industry is growing very fast. The tourists from other countries are playing a crucial role in the economy of many countries. Some people opine that the visitors from other countries should pay more to see the cultural and
histyorical
of or relating to the study of history
historical
places as compare to the local people.
i
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I, also
I also
also
, strongly agree with
this
statement. The following paragraphs will discuss the two issues and support my opinion. To start with, many
countries
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countries, for
for example
,
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
is gaining a good amount of
money
from their tourists from other
european
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
countries which are far more developed than
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
. Those people have attractions towards the beautiful
cultural
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culture
and beauty of the places in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
. They are ready to pay any amount for that and they can afford
this
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
there is no problem in taking more
money
from them.
This
money
in turn can be used to develop or refurbish the old buildings.
Secondly
, they are holding the
citizenship
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citizens
of other
countries so, they
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countries, so they
are taking the
previlige
a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privilege
privileges
from
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of
that
country
. They are enjoying the life by visiting other countries. On the other side, the local people should be allowed for free or only a little amount of
money
to enjoy these places because, what is the benefit for them if they are paying a lot in their countries to see their ancestors' places.
second
Suggestion
Second
viewpoint is that, they pay very much to study or go to the foreign countries
.
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.
That is
why, they should have some rights in their
country
at least. On the
third
slot, if they get
this
shortage,
then
they will encourage the foreigners and promote their scenario which in turn provide economic growth to the
country
. To sum up, it is clear that, travellers add up to the prudence of any
country
as well as the local people can do the promotion for that.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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