In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of this. How can we deal with those causes?

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In most of the countries, criminal activities are thriving day by day

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This

is caused by a number of reasons

behind

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behind, such

such

unemployement

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

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illetracy

ignorance resulting from not reading

illiteracy

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profusion

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rising standards of living and many more.

However there

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However, there

is no

such

issue which we

can not

cannot

deal with so here in the

eassy

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

below will discuss about the main reasons and the ways to face these causes.

Firstly

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the people who are unemployed are giving a main hit to the crime rate as these people

can not

cannot

afford to live in

society

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a society

they get involved to do crimes to

fullfill

put in effect

fulfil

their basic needs unaware of the fact that the results can be

distructive

causing destruction or much damage

destructive

to their lives.

Secondly

illetracy

ignorance resulting from not reading

illiteracy

also

a huge problem

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for

society as these people do not have any knowledge about how to live in a society with a good manner

addition these

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addition, these

people are agile and can be influenced easily to do any wrong task.

Furthermore

, profusion is

also

a reason which is getting

worst

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worse

as due to lack of facilities some people do not get what they want which makes them disturbed owing to their involvement in crimes.

On the other hand

, there are few things which can be done to face or deal with

such

a problem.The

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

and societies should take the equal

innitiatives

readiness to embark on bold new ventures

initiative

to solve

this

obstacle

for instance

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Free education should be provided to people who

can not

cannot

afford to study

moreover

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

opportunities can be introduced so that each one can earn money to serve their families. And

ofcourse

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of course

strict action should be taken who are convicted

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for

with

any crime so they can learn about the outcomes of their doings. To sum up, I would say there are considerable causes of

increase

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the increase

of crime rates and

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of course

by taking appropriate steps

this

problem can be

deal

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dealt

with

atleast

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at least

there would be a small change if each and every person get involved to solve

this

issue.

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