In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of this. How can we deal with those causes?

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In most of the countries, criminal activities are thriving day by day

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is caused by a number of reasons

behind

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behind, such

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unemployement

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

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illetracy

ignorance resulting from not reading

illiteracy

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profusion

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rising standards of living and many more.

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issue which we

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an analytic or interpretive literary composition

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below will discuss about the main reasons and the ways to face these causes.

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the people who are unemployed are giving a main hit to the crime rate as these people

can not

cannot

afford to live in

society

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a society

they get involved to do crimes to

fullfill

put in effect

fulfil

their basic needs unaware of the fact that the results can be

distructive

causing destruction or much damage

destructive

to their lives.

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illetracy

ignorance resulting from not reading

illiteracy

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a huge problem

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for

society as these people do not have any knowledge about how to live in a society with a good manner

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addition these

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addition, these

people are agile and can be influenced easily to do any wrong task.

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, profusion is

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a reason which is getting

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worse

as due to lack of facilities some people do not get what they want which makes them disturbed owing to their involvement in crimes.

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, there are few things which can be done to face or deal with

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a problem.The

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

and societies should take the equal

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readiness to embark on bold new ventures

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to solve

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obstacle

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Free education should be provided to people who

can not

cannot

afford to study

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employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

opportunities can be introduced so that each one can earn money to serve their families. And

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strict action should be taken who are convicted

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for

with

any crime so they can learn about the outcomes of their doings. To sum up, I would say there are considerable causes of

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the increase

of crime rates and

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of course

by taking appropriate steps

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problem can be

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dealt

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there would be a small change if each and every person get involved to solve

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issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

328 words

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economic disparity
propensity
recidivism
deterrent
rehabilitative
judicial system
corruption
socioeconomic
alienation
stigmatization
decriminalization
enforcement
gentrification
preemptive measures
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