Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the recent years, the impact of
growing number
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the growing number
a growing number
of advertisements can be seen on people, particularly on the youngsters. Indeed, most ads are made to target children, as they are vulnerable to get get influenced quickly. In my opinion, not all advertisements affects
adversily
in an adverse manner
adversely
, rather are made for
purpose
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the purpose
a purpose
purposes
. Advertisements of various products are gaining popularity these days. Many hold the negative view about the commercials telecasted during daily shows. They are being objected
for
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to
containing
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contain
scenes which children should not perceive.
For instance
, adverts relating to taking drugs,
although
, the message imparted is positive, yet the images are sensitive for children to watch. Contrary to
this
, advertising about
such
information, not only spreads
awareness but
Accept comma addition
awareness, but
also
creates fear in the young mind and directs them to take the right path in life. Another
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
put forward in support of my point, is
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
of commercials aim to educate the tender mind about multiple products and services available in the market.
such
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Such
marketing strategy simply helps children to be more sensible while making their choices. Indeed, there are
number
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a number
of advertisements, which offer their products in attractive packaging to lure youngsters and try to lay a trap to target them.
However
, there are companies who before presenting the product, define their purpose well. As in the case of
handwash
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Handwash
and other soaps, so that children can understand its value before even using it. To sum up, not all advertisements leave a negative impact on kids. Companies are now in constant competition and
hence
understand the value of their customers. It is
therefore
necessary to have a broader perspective of
today's
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todays
adverts.
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