Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that
children
can learn productively by watching television and they be
stimulated to watch Change the verb form
are
tv
at home and school. In my opinion, watching Correct your spelling
TV
TV
can benefit the learning process, however
, I disagree that children
be motivated to watch TV
both at home and school. I shall put forth my arguments to support my views. There is no doubt that TV
can be a powerful tool of
delivering information and a nice part of Change preposition
for
learning
process. Being an audiovisual medium more effective Add an article
the learning
result
can be achieved. information seen on a screen can stay longer in the minds of Fix the agreement mistake
results
children
. There is something that can be easily taught by visual illustrations. Even boring subjects like history can be made interesting with the help of TV
. However
, if TV
is used as an educational tool then
a
strict monitoring Remove the article
apply
needed
as Add a missing verb
is needed
what
Change preposition
to what
children
watch on TV
. All those talk shows and soap operas we can see every day are a complete waste of time and even can have negative effects by distracting children
from their studies. Moreover
, the most of so-called educational programs like National Geographic cannot replace books and academic lectures because they tend to entertain people and do not have an aim to give deep and concentrated knowledge. It is highly unlikely that TV
channel directors would abandon their profits and change talk shows to lectures and video lessons. Furthermore
, if children
watch TV
in school also
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apply
then
their interaction with the teacher would be limited. Teachers teach a lot of things apart from academics. They can come down to the level of the student and can also
stimulate children
to learn. What is more, children
would read less when they learn everything from TV
. Reading is an active activity as compared to TV
which is a passive activity. So, it would be detrimental to the holistic development of children
. To conclude
, although
TV
is a very good educational medium, it should be used within limits and whatever children
learn from TV
should also
be carefully monitored by parents and teachers.Submitted by bammesdilia24 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion