It is inevitable that as technology advances,traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the recent year, we have experienced an enormous development in
technology
. As the consequence to
this
, many people are afraid that long-time traditional values might be loosened. In my opinion, I partly agree with
this
statement. While it may be true in some cases, other culture seems to be unaffected or
moreover
, be cherished by
technology
. It
is argue
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is argued
argues
that though the social media has helped individual access the world
easier but
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easier, but
it has
also
destroyed the reading tradition in the youth generation.
For instance
, following the increase of attractive entertainments on social media, people
tent
have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined
tend
to watch televisions or surf the Internet, rather than reading books. People may claim that books’ content have been uploaded on
Internet
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the Internet
, so they basically read the book on
web
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the web
instead
of
in
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on
paper.
However
, reading
book
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books
need time to chew while spending time too much on intelligent devices will damage your eye and cause
insominia
an inability to sleep; chronic sleeplessness
insomnia
by the blue light releasing by them.
In
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On
the other hand, had it not been for the evolution in
technology
, traditional values would not have been
spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
widely to the youth. In many countries, the government has used social media for disseminating the country’s and cultures.
For example
, a long-time festival of an area is broadcast to the society through social media.
This
help
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helps
bring the old values to the adolescents, and
moreover
, spread away the culture widely on a global scale. In conclusion, though there are some cultures that have witnessed
negative effect
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the negative effect
as a result
of advances in
technology
,
however
, there are still some traditional ways of life has survived and even flourished. In my opinion, if we know how to use the
technology
wisely, it would be
great help
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a great help
to drive our society upwards,
withour
in absence of
without
loosing our precious tradition.
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