It is inevitable that as technology advances,traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the recent year, we have experienced an enormous development in

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. As the consequence to

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, many people are afraid that long-time traditional values might be loosened. In my opinion, I partly agree with

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statement. While it may be true in some cases, other culture seems to be unaffected or

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, be cherished by

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is argue

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is argued

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that though the social media has helped individual access the world

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easier, but

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destroyed the reading tradition in the youth generation.

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, following the increase of attractive entertainments on social media, people

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have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined

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to watch televisions or surf the Internet, rather than reading books. People may claim that books’ content have been uploaded on

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the Internet

, so they basically read the book on

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the web

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on

paper.

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, reading

book

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books

need time to chew while spending time too much on intelligent devices will damage your eye and cause

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an inability to sleep; chronic sleeplessness

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by the blue light releasing by them.

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the other hand, had it not been for the evolution in

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, traditional values would not have been

spreaded

distribute or disperse widely

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widely to the youth. In many countries, the government has used social media for disseminating the country’s and cultures.

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, a long-time festival of an area is broadcast to the society through social media.

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helps

bring the old values to the adolescents, and

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, spread away the culture widely on a global scale. In conclusion, though there are some cultures that have witnessed

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the negative effect

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of advances in

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,

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, there are still some traditional ways of life has survived and even flourished. In my opinion, if we know how to use the

technology

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wisely, it would be

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a great help

to drive our society upwards,

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loosing our precious tradition.