More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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In the modern world, it is observed by some authorities and politicians that people have been preferring to be a parent later mid-ages when compared to the past. Economic reasons and
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ambition have caused that the people postponed having a
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. I believe that having a
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in later
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has more advantages not only individuals but
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for society.
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of all, the human
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has been increasing rapidly for a long time. Due to the locations’ high density, the living cost has increased suddenly.
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, the cost of having a baby is extremely high. So, most of the couples have decided to birth a
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after they stabilize their economic power.
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, especially after the idea of liberalism have been spreading all over the world since 1980, people have become more selfish and only focused on their
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.
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, if a woman has a baby at 30 years old, which is the most important
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for her
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, she has to pause her
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for a minimum of 2 years. High
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in big cities mostly decreases the quality of the education system. If a society has a low number of students, the teachers are able to teach them more efficiently and productively.
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, to have selected and quality people increase the production and profitability around the country.
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, to find a job is heavy for the citizens in the countries which have a huge
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. If parents would choose to be parent later
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, the
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decreases, but at the same time, the unemployment rate will decline.
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, the only disadvantage of
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issue is a low workforce. But, after industry 4.0, there will be no need people to work in factories because of the robots and machinery powers would do more work than a human being. In conclusion, in
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contemporary world, people tend to have a
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in
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if compared with their parents. I am strongly convinced that, thanks to
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situation, the countries and individuals have been benefited in many ways as aforementioned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • delaying parenthood
  • financial stability
  • career advancement
  • personal goals
  • higher education
  • fertility treatments
  • relationship stability
  • health care improvements
  • personal development
  • postponing children
  • achieve milestones
  • family planning
  • modern society
  • life expectancy
  • paternal and maternal age
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