The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
This
report derives from a line graph which illustrates a
60 years of historical fuel Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
consumption
by Americans with a coming 10 year
projection.
As an initial overview, To compare with other fuels, Petrol and Oil Add a hyphen
10-year
consumption
are always in
high by US citizens, Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, Nuclear, solar and hydropower has
no chance to double Correct subject-verb agreement
have
up
their uses in the future.
Petrol and Oil have begun dominating by Change preposition
apply
utilized
35 Wrong verb form
utilising
Quadrillion
since 1980. Moreover
, the projection shows consumtion
will be moving Correct your spelling
consumption
in
highest peak Change preposition
to
nearly
50 Change preposition
of nearly
quadrillion
in 2030 as well. Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
On the other hand
, Coal and natural gas were
consumed a slight difference in the beginning 20 Unnecessary verb
apply
quadallion
and 16 Correct your spelling
quadrillion
quadrillion
respectively. But both Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
consumption
was
levelled up at the same place in 1985 and Unnecessary verb
apply
continued
follow up the same Add the particle
tocontinued
path way
till 2015. Future Correct your spelling
pathway
predictionrepresents
that Coal Correct your spelling
prediction represents
prediction-represents
consumption
will increase 5
Change preposition
by 5
quadrillion
more than now and natural gas will remain Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
same
as it is.
Uses of Nuclear, Solar and Hydropower were very minimal Correct article usage
the same
like
around 3 Change preposition
apply
quadrillion
in 1980. Later 1990, except Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
hydropower
all Change preposition
for hydropower
shows
Change the verb form
show
very
steady upward tendency till 2030. But there has no chance to increase a lot like others fuel resources.Correct article usage
a very
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