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school which

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school, which

closes to my current

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. I moved to my current

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three years ago, and it is far from my previous schools. I can talk about my high

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. One of the its

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features is that it is very close to some central areas. Its physical conditions were good while I was studying there. Teachers were qualified generally when I was in there. Again, I can talk about my high

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. Even if it was close to some central areas. You couldn'

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find any

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near the

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to have fun, and

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transport between the

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and central areas was not easy. You needed to walk almost 15 minutes and get on the bus. I think English courses were not sufficient, so it was hard for a student to improve his/her English if s/he was not very eager to improve it. I want to have my own home. Currently, I am living with my family. I have my own room, and it is not too small. My family doesn'

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interfere with me, so I partly feel free, but I think I would feel freer if I did live in my own apartment. Our home is not located far from the city centre, but I would want to live closer to the city centre.

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is not very close to recreational areas, it bothers me.

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, the isolation system in our building is weak, so I can hear what neighbours talk about and I cannot turn the music up, and I don'

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situation. I want to have my own

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since I started to study university. I was not able to hire my own

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during university, and now I am kind of okay with living with my family for a while. They want to have a reasonable salary, and they,

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, want to be hired in a good job. They want to travel all over the world. They don'

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want to feel under pressure because of economical reasons. I think generally people feel happy when they buy or have something they want to have. It shows that people are not that much happy and try finding a way to feel happy. I am not totally sure about it, but it may be because people feel secure when they have everything they think they should have.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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402 words

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Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

Fully explain your ideas

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Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.

In many countries, the qualities of life in large cities is becoming worse. What are the cause for this problem? What measure should be taken to tackle this problem?

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?