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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In the future, it is predicted by scientists that all the people of the world will talk the same
language
. I believe that though
this
 can be advantageous and beneficial f
or
Suggestion
to
the world at large, it can have its drawbacks on individual societies and cultures. Speaking the same
language
 will remove communication barriers. There will certainly be no misunderstanding and misinterpretation which will lead to better understanding between people.
Moreover
, it will be made easier for trading and businesses would flourish as people can convey their message clearly. Impoliteness and rudeness due to the usage of a foreign
language
 improperly would not be present, making people be more welcoming and relaxed.
However
, with increasing number of people speaking the same global
language
, the
culture
 and rich heritage of a community declines.
Language
 is intrinsically associated with the
culture
 of its people. As the number of people speaking the local
language
 of a village or community decreases, their
culture
 dies along with it.
As a result
, tourism would
also
 decline as people would not have interesting cultures and heritage to visit and enjoy.
Furthermore
, many jobs of people who work as translators and interpreters would be lost due to the globalisation of a particular
language
. In conclusion,
although
 communication barriers would be removed by all the people of the world speaking one
language
, I believe that loss of u
nique
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the unique culture
culture
 of each community is far too precious to be considered as a positive development.
Therefore
, the drawbacks of a global
language
 outweigh its advantages, and
this
 is a negative development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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