You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you of my order from your shop, I need to buy several electrical goods at yours.
I would be grateful if you were that this
thing, I find in yours, as you know some shops cannot afford these things, I need to buy them from you or if you would over there my request from another place then
I will pay for you.
If you don't mind, I need you to tell me the price because my budget is limited. So, I need to prepare the money early. when you agree to my order tell me please about the price and how and how long my order takes time because I am so fast to receive them and use them and I don't have more time if they will be
late.
All my request is pretty crucial and essential, to be honest.
I look forward to receiving your response, and I thank you for helping me.
Yours faithfully,
Monirah MohammadWrong verb form
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Work on a more appropriate formal tone for the tasks which require writing to a business or formal institution.
task achievement
Clearly state the specific items you wish to purchase and use clear and concise language to communicate with the recipient.
coherence cohesion
Strive to use accurate and varied sentence structure to convey your requests more effectively.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite