some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city while other think that bicycle is best discuss both and give your opinion

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,
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modern era
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
provide
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provides
us
differnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
types of transport. People
use
transport for their daily purposes and have
go
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gone
to the work.
it
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It
argurd
present reasons and arguments
argued
some like car for travelling
on the other hand
some like bicycles.
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paragraphs we are
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marked by complexity and richness of detail
elaborating
both.
Firstly
,
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,
bicycle
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the bicycle
is a free of cost form of transport
furthermore
use
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the use
of
bicyclein
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the bicycle in
bicycle in
a bicycle in
routine
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is very
helpful to do exercise in
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
swamped life.
on
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On
the other
side it
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side, it
is very
beneficiAL
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
fo
in the direction of
to
for
reduce traffic and air
pollutoins
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
.
for
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For
instance in
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instance, in
2016 all
russisan
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Russia or its people or culture or language
Russian
workers used cycle in every
friday
the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day
Friday
for going to work the conclusion is that
a
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an
immense fall on air
polliutions
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
and traffic problems.
coparing
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Compared
Comparing
Coparing
to other
privious
just preceding something else in time or order
previous
years.
health
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
Health
rate of
russian
of or pertaining to or characteristic of Russia or its people or culture or language
Russian
reaction
resin
increse
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increased
increases
25% and rating of heats disease falls down
.
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.
on
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On
the
flipside
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flip side
, some uses cars
for
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to
go to job or other works.
they
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They
think
luxious
displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
is
a
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an
amendity
pleasantness resulting from agreeable conditions
amenity
tranfort
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
transfer
service.
they
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They
imagid
an iconic mental representation
imaged
bicycle is only
waste
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a waste
of time and we cannot travel more distance in
few hours
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a few hours
.
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.
therfore they
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Therefore, they
Therefore they
Therfore they
prefer car rather than cycle
.
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.
for
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For
instance my
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instance, my
company is 25 kilometres from my house so by the bicycle to go we feel very tiresome and indolent during work time IN my
opinoin
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, cycles are the
ecofridenly
war of
transpotation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
rather than
luxious
displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
.
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.
it
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It
comes down the level of various health
disesea
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diseases
disease
mad keep us fit and
healthy but
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healthy, but
on the other hand
for far travelling we can
use
cars
.
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.
the
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The
conclusion is that people should
use
cycle in daily purposes
instead
of cars.

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