The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Bar Chart illustrates the
amount
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of households with owned and rented
accommodation
in two countries (England and Whales) from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, owned
accommodation
showed
upward
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an upward
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trend,
while
rented
accommodation
showed
downward
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a downward
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trend throughout the
period
. Both of these accommodations had some fluctuations.
Although
owned
accommodation
initially
had a lower rate, it
out raced
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outraced
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rented
accommodation
at the end
of the
period
.
Moreover
, both of them
had
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leveled
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off in 1971. Owned
accommodation
was at around 22% at the start of the
period
in 1918 and it was far lower than rented
accommodation
.
Then
, it increased slightly and
leveled
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off in
next
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the next
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two years
with
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33%. From 1961 to 2001, it showed
the
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an
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increasing trend with
the
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a
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percentage of 40 in 1961
,
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and
equaled
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to
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the percentage of rented
accommodation
in 1971 with 50%. And
then
it increased to 60, 70 and nearly 71% respectively.
Then
, it decreased slightly
too
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to
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around 65%. At the start of the
period
rented
accommodation
was higher with just under 80%.
Then
, it faced
decline
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a decline
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and remained constant in 1939 and 1953
with
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just below 70%.
Then
, it decreased up till 2001 from 60% to 30%.
Then
, it rose slightly in 2011 to almost 35%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • accommodation
  • owned
  • rented
  • prevalent
  • transition period
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • summarize
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