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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take

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Dear Neighbors, I am writing to you to address the grievances raised by you with respect to the noise coming from my house. I would like
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 letting you know that I accept we are at fault to play loud music in the silent hours defying our community guidelines. My friends and I have gone slightly overboard with the noise in the past two weekends since we have gathered together after 10 years.
However
, having said that I do not believe that it is excusable as it did cause
nuisance
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 in the
neighborhood
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. Taking complete ownership
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 the incident, my family and I would like to apologize to the entire community. I pledge to consider
this
 as my
first
 warning and refrain from repeating it in the future. In order to avoid any
such
 unprecedented
incident
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 I will ensure there is no loud music playing after 11 p.m. and in the event of a
party
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 I will take prior approvals and conduct it only in the designated common area. Yours Faithfully, Shruti Ravinder

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sincere apologies
  • inconvenience
  • disturbance
  • earnestly
  • unfortunately
  • recently
  • necessary repairs
  • soundproofing
  • appropriate hours
  • notify
  • regrettable
  • considerate
  • peace and quiet
  • appreciate your understanding
  • steps to mitigate
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