Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Each year, the number of animals
have been killed
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has been killed
by people to get
meat
for
meal
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a meal
the meal
meals
is
deamatically
in a very impressive manner
dramatically
increase
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increased
increasing
. According to the real situation, eating much
meat
can affect both our health and the Earth environment. Almost everyone
think
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thinks
is thinking
that
meat
contain
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contains
a lot of proteins, vitamins and
calcium which
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calcium, which
can help us grow and make us powerful.
However
, people don't know that
meat
contant
gotten under control
contained
the acid
such
as amino acid, uric
acid which
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acid, which
they could
distroy
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroy
destroys
destroyed
our health by causing many
kind
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kinds
of diseases.
In addition
, the best food for
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
Poole
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of
meat
is vegetables and fruits because they have more proteins and vitamins than
meat
. The chemical substances that
are use
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are used
to feed the animals to make it grow faster can strongly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
human health
wthout
in absence of
without
noticing. For their healthy life, people decide to eat vegetables and fruits
instead
of eating animals. Eating no
meat
or fish can
benefits
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benefit
the world in many ways and
also
help the Earth from a lot of serious problems. In my opinion, people choose to be vegetarians or vegans because they pity the animals and they don't want to kill lives of other living things.
The big
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Bigger
companies tend to raise more and more animals and the waste of animals from those factories, which pollute the environment, are
increase
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increasing
increased
day by day.
That is
the reason why people prefer eating not to eat
meat
to save the Earth. In conclusion, I believe that stop eating
meat
or fish is the best idea to live a very long and healthy
live
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life
and
also
provide benefits to the world in
serveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
ways.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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