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A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It goes without saying that
decision
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 making is a significant phenomenon in every
person
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's life as it has an immense impact on one's future. It is deemed that a
person
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 ought to take advice from others while taking any judgment
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 of deciding alone. I concur with
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 notion. In the following paragraphs, I will explicate my views. To commence with the reasons, many alternatives are the predominant one. To elaborate it, when a
person
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 has to decide about something, sometimes it is very hard to think about future consequences of that
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. In
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 situations, help from any experienced individual can be helpful.
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, most of the students, after competition of their senior secondary education, consult with their tutors to select the branch of graduation. Along with
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, some decisions may have lifelong effects on the other masses" lives, as when a
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 what decides something, he is oblivious about others' losses. To exemplify, in a family, when father makes a plan to leave a job, it affects the lives of his children since they are unable to fulfil their need of education or food in the scarcity of money. To conclude, I want to reiterate that despite the
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 making is one's own right, it is fruitful to discuss with others before finalising the
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.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diverse perspectives
  • well-rounded decisions
  • potential risks
  • pitfalls
  • consulting
  • valuable insights
  • shared responsibility
  • commitment
  • successful implementation
  • personal introspection
  • alignment with one's values
  • independence
  • autonomy
  • confidence in one's judgment
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