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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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Many professional mental health researchers have stated that the feeling of people can affect by the
color
a band that fits around the neck and is usually folded over
collar
.
Also
,
this
 can be a reason why in the offices and hospitals during the process of decorating should focus on
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 schemes.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly agree with
this
 statement on how
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 can affect on people's health and working.
First
 of all, Decorating office and hospital should be based on
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
clear
 schemes to help
worker's
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workers'
 concentration. In the office and hospital
are
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is
 the place that
need
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needs
 a lot of concentration and without any distraction. Workers and doctors sometimes feel stressful if their
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
have
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has
such
 bright
color
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
 that can make them feel annoying and distracting.
For instance
, In the hospital doctors and nurses wear white and light
blue so
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blue, so
 these
colour
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colours
 can help patients
to feel
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feel
 more ease and even most hospitals are painted in white
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
. Another reason is
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
clear
 does help with boosting moods so when you are stressing
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 can help you a little with your moods.
For example
, most Korean bands are trying to make their concept match their clothes so it can make them more powerful.
Color
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Colour
 has many
benefit
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benefits
 to people in many ways,
such
 as people's health and even work capacity because
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 can even make people feel more comfortable with themselves.
Also
, it can boost
mood so
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mood, so
 that it can help them with their workforce. An example to
this
 statement is Angela is a lady that loves greens so much that she even painted her house green and everything in her house is
also
 green.
Beside
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Inside
 her house her clothing styles are
also
 green in
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 and she said that green can help her to be herself. In conclusion,
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 schemes have many effects
to
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of
 people
on
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in
 their daily lives because it helps them concentrate and boost their
moods
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mood
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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