The bar chart chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

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of divorces in two European countries namely;

Finland

and Sweden throughout the span of 2011 and 2015. From a cursory glance

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manifest that both countries’ divorce rates had some fluctuations. Sweden experienced a downward trend,

while

Finland

showed an accumulation throughout the

period

.

Although

Finland

initially

had a lower

rate

, it outraced Sweden

at the end

of the

period

.

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Sweden’s divorce

rate

, it was about 45% in 2011,

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higher than

Finland

’s

rate

by approximately 8%. In 2012, it elevated

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fifty

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.

However

, the figure showed a gradual decrease to approximately 47% in 2013

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and continued to decline steadily to the end of the

period

, reaching around 45% in 2014 and

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its nadir at about 37% in 2015. As for

Finland

,

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rate

was less than 40% in 2011, and it tumbled in 2012 to 32%.

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steady growth during the

period

. It proliferated to approximately 41% in 2014 and remained steady for the

next

year.